Chapter 9 - Translation
The Storm King
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Chapter 9: The Vision
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Chapter 9: The Vision Leon felt like he had just been shaken up and thrown away by a rock giant. His head spun, and he felt like he was about to vomit. Most of all, though, he felt absolutely drained. He couldn’t even muster the energy to open his eyes, let alone do anything else. He wondered why he was awake if he was so devoid of energy. No answers came to him, so he simply decided to perform some breathing exercises. It took a little while, but he eventually managed to muster up the energy to crack open his eyelids. He saw very little when he did, however. The sky was filled with mist, with a pale golden light permeating through it. This light was bright enough for Leon to look around, but it seemed there was nothing around to see. He was on a small grassy island, floating in a vast sea of endless mist. There was no wind, no sound, no anything out there. Leon had no idea how long he remained lying down, but it took him a while to begin to move. It was a struggle to sit up, but when he did, he got a better look around. There were no buildings or plants on the island, apart from grass, but he noticed something behind him he hadn’t before. The island was only about one hundred feet in diameter, and in the very center was a white marble slab, perfectly square, about ten feet to a side, and completely flush with the ground surrounding it. Set within the center of that slab was another square, this one made of black granite, sparkling with tiny lights like the night sky, and only taking up one square foot. There was nothing else around, and Leon was unable to ascertain the purpose of the marble slab, so he simply paced around near the edge of the island. He calmly walked in circles, trying to think of a way out, but nothing occurred to him. He was still a beginner mage, and whatever or wherever this place was, was far beyond his meager knowledge. Time passed slowly here. Or was it quickly? Leon couldn’t tell. The light remained consistent, and he didn’t feel the need to eat or drink, so there was no way to tell the time. It could have been days he was pacing around the island, or simply a few hours, but there was nothing else to do, so he just kept leisurely walking and staring out into the mist. After what felt like a long time, he finally noticed a change, and it was a very subtle change at first. It started as a gentle breeze. Leon hardly thought anything of it, until he realized that it was the first time he had felt the wind since waking up. He quickly put some distance between himself and the edge of the island and began to look around, trying to notice any other changes to this strange space. And notice something he did. It looked like a rapidly approaching clump of darkness. He saw it when it was still just a speck in the distance, but in less than ten seconds it had doubled in size. As it came closer and closer, he saw brief flashes of bright light within, and seconds later he heard the sound of distant thunder. This was actually an approaching storm! The dark clouds were upon him in minutes. Rain poured down on this little island, washing away much of the grass and dirt, revealing stone tiles beneath. Lightning arced through the sky, and Leon was deafened by the thunder. The wind turned into a howling gale and buffeted him ceaselessly. There was little he could do, there was no shelter around and he was too weak to make any, so all Leon could do was try and keep his head down, brace himself against the wind, and try to keep away from the edge of the island. Eventually, Leon just hit the deck, laying down on his stomach with his arms covering his head and ears. He felt the island rumble and shake, but he kept his head down. The storm raged for fifteen minutes until the wind began to let up and the rain slowed considerably. Once he felt secure enough to do so, Leon lifted his head and saw that much of the grass had been swept away, leaving only a small amount around the perimeter of the island. This revealed numerous white and red stone tiles that had been beneath the grass, arranged in a checkerboard pattern. The island’s surface was covered in this tile until about five feet away from the edge, which was the only part of the island that still had grass. He took a look back at the marble slab, but nothing about it had changed that he could tell. Leon couldn’t see any other changes to the island, so he turned his eyes upwards. The thick mists were still present, but the golden light that had shone through it was gone, blocked by the storm clouds. The rain had slowed to a light shower, but there were still quite a few arcs of lightning crossing the sky, and they all seemed to be concentrated in a single direction. As Leon looked that way, he heard a noise through the thunder. It sounded like an eagle’s cry, but he doubted it at first, thinking it was just some kind of auditory hallucination from all the thunder that was still ringing in his ears. But only at first. In the distance, amidst the deep black storm clouds and arcs of lightning, he saw a large pair of feathered wings. It was hard to tell from where he was, but he estimated the bird to be at least three times taller than he was. But even from that distance, he could tell that its golden beak and talons were razor sharp, and its matching golden eyes pierced through him, seeing everything as if he were a naked mortal under the eyes of a god. He felt a tightness in his chest, and his legs began to shake. His blood felt like it was boiling, and he instinctively knew that it was in response to this bird’s presence. The bird opened its beak and cried. Instantly, all the lightning in the area ceased, the winds quieted down, and the rain stopped falling. The bird circled the island a few times, staring at Leon, before deciding to land directly in the middle, right over the granite square. Now that it was this close, Leon could see that his estimate was off, it was at least five times his own height, maybe six, and its feathers were flecked with gold. But now, Leon’s blood and mana were resonating with the bird so much that his legs gave out and he fell to his knees. He looked up and made eye contact with the bird. He immediately felt a sharp pain in his mind, and the island trembled. It didn’t take much for Leon to figure out who this was. This bird was his ancestor, the founder of his clan, and the progenitor of his bloodline. He tried to look up one more time, and the bird spread its wings and screeched one more time, staring down at Leon. When Leon’s eyes met the bird’s, his vision blurred and faded away. His mind grew hazy, and he began to slip back into unconsciousness. His thoughts went foggy, and he had a bad feeling that allowing himself to let go would be a very bad thing, but he didn’t quite know why. His last coherent thought was to follow his instinct and fight back, somehow. He slowly brought his right index finger up to his mouth and bit down hard. His teeth went so deep that the finger almost came off, but clarity returned to Leon’s mind. He glared back up at the bird, enduring the pressure it exerted with its presence. The bird glared back, its golden eyes burning with resplendent light, but it slowly retracted its wings. It screeched again, for the last time, and the storm clouds dissolved away in seconds. There was no more rain, lightning, or thunder, and the winds died down entirely. The bird looked down at the marble and granite slab, and the light from its eyes seemed to melt it down and reshape it. The marble slab grew until it became a raised platform five or six steps high, and the granite rose and became a simple black chair in the middle. It almost looked like a throne, but one for a decidedly humble monarch. With one last glance towards Leon, the bird flapped its wings once and disappeared into the distance. Leon took a few moments to collect himself and struggled to his feet. He hobbled over to the platform, up the steps, and stood before the throne. He felt it was pretty obvious what he needed to do now but took one more look around. The surroundings had returned to their previous serene state, there was no hint that there ever was a storm here, and the bird had disappeared into the mists. With that one last look, Leon smiled, sat down in the chair, and closed his eyes. — Leon felt himself lying down on hard rock. The air was cool, and he felt the heat of the sun on his skin. His body felt both drained of magical power but also filled with great strength. His eyes were closed, and he couldn’t quite summon the willpower to open them. He lay there for quite a while, an hour or two, he guessed. All he did was enjoy the feeling of the sun and quietly breathe. When his eyes finally opened, he found himself back at the top of the Storm Titan’s Mountain. The peak next to the platform had been shattered, leaving it half as tall as it had been before, and there were more than a few burns around him. All signs of the magic array were gone, save for a few blackened lines, and there were puddles in the shallow pits of the stone. Artorias was sitting on the edge of the platform, looking out over the forest, when he noticed that Leon had finally woken up. He breathed a sigh of relief, allowing his tension of the past night to dissipate. He got up, as calmly as he could, and walked over to his son. “How do you feel, little lion?” It took Leon a few moments to really process what he was asking, before giving an uncertain reply. “All right, I guess. Very tired.” “That’s understandable. Your body was just flooded with foreign magic, nearly torn apart from both inside and out, and had to awaken its own dormant power in order to not completely break.” “So, I’ve awakened? The ritual worked?” Artorias smiled with pride. “Of course it did, you need only examine your own physical condition to see it.” Leon did just that, letting what little mana he had accumulated this far flow through his body. He felt small amounts of energy return to his muscles, he felt the absence of his previous injuries, but the biggest thing he noticed was that every time magic flowed into his heart, not that much would be turned into mana. Most seemed to simply disappear. “I can feel magic vanishing into my heart, does that mean it’s being stored? Have I achieved the second-tier of magic?” Leon asked with excitement. “Yes, you have. It’s an easy enough thing to sense when you get stronger but trust me when I say that you are now counted among the ranks of second-tier mages.” Artorias beamed down at Leon, every word bursting with pride in his son. Leon fought the urge to burst out into laughter, but an enormous smile still appeared on his face. He was about to continue his excited questioning when his stomach gave a huge growl. “I suppose you would be a little hungry, you’ve spent almost an entire day unconscious,” Artorias said, looking at the setting sun. “More than a little.” Artorias whipped up some of the lion meat into small steaks and threw together the last of the herbs he’d brought into a pick-me-up for Leon, before serving them to the young man. Leon tore into the food as if he hadn’t eaten in years, and all the meat was gone in minutes. The bread soon followed, as did all the dried fruit they’d brought along. It was truly a feast for the young man, and he had much to celebrate.
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**Chapitre 9 : La Vision**
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**Chapitre 9 : La Vision** Leon eut l’impression d’avoir été secoué puis jeté par un géant de pierre. Sa tête tournait, et il sentait une nausée monter en lui. Mais plus que tout, il se sentait vidé de toute énergie. Il n’avait même pas la force d’ouvrir les yeux, encore moins de faire quoi que ce soit d’autre. Il se demanda pourquoi il était éveillé s’il était si épuisé. Aucune réponse ne lui vint, alors il décida simplement de pratiquer quelques exercices de respiration. Cela prit un peu de temps, mais il finit par rassembler assez de force pour entrouvrir ses paupières. Pourtant, il ne vit presque rien. Le ciel était empli de brume, traversé d’une lumière dorée et pâle. Cette clarté lui permit de regarder autour de lui, mais il sembla qu’il n’y avait rien à voir. Il se trouvait sur une petite île herbeuse, flottant dans une mer infinie de brume. Il n’y avait pas de vent, pas de son, rien du tout. Leon ignorait depuis combien de temps il était allongé, mais il lui fallut un moment avant de commencer à bouger. Ce fut un effort de s’asseoir, mais une fois redressé, il put mieux observer les alentours. Aucun bâtiment ni plante ne se trouvait sur l’île, à part l’herbe, mais il remarqua quelque chose derrière lui qu’il n’avait pas vu auparavant. L’île ne faisait qu’une trentaine de mètres de diamètre, et en son centre exact se trouvait une dalle de marbre blanc, parfaitement carrée, d’environ trois mètres de côté, et parfaitement alignée avec le sol. Au centre de cette dalle se trouvait un autre carré, cette fois en granit noir, scintillant de petites lumières comme un ciel étoilé, et ne couvrant qu’un mètre carré. Il n’y avait rien d’autre autour, et Leon ne parvint pas à deviner l’utilité de la dalle de marbre. Il se mit alors à arpenter les bords de l’île. Il marchait en cercle, calmement, cherchant une issue, mais rien ne lui vint à l’esprit. Il n’était qu’un mage débutant, et cet endroit, quel qu’il fût, dépassait largement ses modestes connaissances. Le temps s’écoulait lentement ici. Ou peut-être rapidement ? Leon n’aurait su le dire. La lumière restait constante, et il n’éprouvait ni faim ni soif, ce qui rendait toute mesure du temps impossible. Cela faisait peut-être des jours qu’il errait sur l’île, ou seulement quelques heures, mais comme il n’y avait rien d’autre à faire, il continua à marcher tout en contemplant la brume. Après ce qui lui parut une éternité, il remarqua enfin un changement, subtil au début. Ce fut une légère brise. Leon n’y prêta guère attention, jusqu’à ce qu’il réalise que c’était la première fois qu’il sentait le vent depuis son réveil. Il s’éloigna rapidement du bord et scriva les alentours, cherchant d’autres modifications dans cet espace étrange. Et il en remarqua une. Une masse sombre semblait approcher à vive allure. Il ne la vit d’abord que comme un point dans le lointain, mais en moins de dix secondes, elle avait doublé de taille. À mesure qu’elle se rapprochait, il distingua des éclairs de lumière vive à l’intérieur, puis entendit le tonnerre gronder au loin. C’était une tempête qui arrivait ! Les nuages sombres l’envahirent en quelques minutes. La pluie s’abattit sur la petite île, emportant une grande partie de l’herbe et de la terre, révélant des dalles de pierre en dessous. Les éclairs zébrèrent le ciel, et le tonnerre assourdit Leon. Le vent se transforma en une bourrasque hurlante qui le frappait sans relâche. Il ne pouvait pas faire grand-chose : aucun abri ne se trouvait à proximité, et il était trop faible pour en créer un. Tout ce qu’il put faire fut de baisser la tête, résister au vent et s’éloigner du bord de l’île. Finalement, Leon se coucha à plat ventre, les bras protégeant sa tête et ses oreilles. Il sentit l’île trembler et vibrer, mais il garda la tête baissée. La tempête fit rage pendant quinze minutes avant que le vent ne commence à faiblir et que la pluie ne ralentisse considérablement. Une fois sûr de pouvoir bouger, Leon leva la tête et constata que la majeure partie de l’herbe avait été emportée, ne laissant qu’une fine bordure autour de l’île. Cela révélait d’innombrables dalles blanches et rouges disposées en damier sous l’herbe. La surface de l’île en était recouverte, sauf sur environ un mètre cinquante du bord, là où l’herbe subsistait. Il jeta un coup d’œil à la dalle de marbre, mais rien ne semblait avoir changé à son sujet. Ne voyant aucune autre modification, Leon leva les yeux. Les brumes épaisses étaient toujours présentes, mais la lumière dorée qui les traversait avait disparu, bloquée par les nuages d’orage. La pluie s’était réduite à une bruine légère, mais de nombreux éclairs sillonnaient encore le ciel, semblant converger dans une seule direction. Alors que Leon regardait dans cette direction, il entendit un cri à travers le tonnerre. Cela ressemblait au cri d’un aigle, mais il en douta d’abord, pensant à une hallucination auditive due au tonnerre qui résonnait encore dans ses oreilles. Mais seulement au début. Au loin, parmi les nuages d’orage noirs et les éclairs, il distingua une paire d’ailes majestueuses. Difficile d’estimer depuis sa position, mais l’oiseau lui sembla faire au moins trois fois sa taille. Pourtant, même à cette distance, il discerna parfaitement son bec et ses serres dorés, tranchants comme des rasoirs, et ses yeux dorés qui le transpercèrent, comme s’il était un simple mortel nu sous le regard d’un dieu. Son cœur se serra, et ses jambes se mirent à trembler. Son sang semblait bouillir, et il sut instinctivement que c’était dû à la présence de l’oiseau. L’oiseau ouvrit son bec et poussa un cri. Instantanément, tous les éclairs s’arrêtèrent, le vent tomba, et la pluie cessa de tomber. L’oiseau fit plusieurs fois le tour de l’île, fixant Leon, avant de se poser en son centre, juste au-dessus du carré de granit. Maintenant qu’il était si proche, Leon réalisa que son estimation était erronée : l’oiseau faisait au moins cinq fois sa taille, peut-être six, et ses plumes étaient parsemées d’or. Mais à présent, le sang et le mana de Leon résonnaient si fort avec l’oiseau que ses jambes fléchirent et qu’il tomba à genoux. Il leva les yeux et croisa son regard. Une douleur aiguë lui transperça l’esprit, et l’île trembla. Il ne lui fallut pas longtemps pour comprendre qui il avait devant lui. Cet oiseau était son ancêtre, le fondateur de son clan, l’origine de sa lignée. Il tenta de relever la tête une dernière fois, et l’oiseau déploya ses ailes avant de pousser un ultime cri, le fixant intensément. Quand leurs regards se rencontrèrent, la vision de Leon se brouilla puis s’évanouit. Son esprit devint confus, et il commença à sombrer à nouveau dans l’inconscience. Ses pensées s’embrumèrent, et il eut le pressentiment que se laisser aller serait une grave erreur, sans savoir pourquoi. Sa dernière pensée claire fut de suivre son instinct et de résister, coûte que coûte. Il leva lentement son index droit à sa bouche et mordit fort. Ses dents s’enfoncèrent si profondément qu’il faillit se couper le doigt, mais sa conscience revint aussitôt. Il fixa l’oiseau avec défi, supportant la pression écrasante de sa présence. L’oiseau le regarda à son tour, ses yeux dorés brillant d’une lumière resplendissante, mais il replia lentement ses ailes. Il poussa un dernier cri, et les nuages d’orage se dissipèrent en quelques secondes. Plus de pluie, plus d’éclairs, plus de tonnerre, et le vent tomba complètement. L’oiseau baissa les yeux vers la dalle de marbre et de granit, et la lumière de son regard sembla la faire fondre et la remodeler. La dalle de marbre s’agrandit jusqu’à devenir une plateforme surélevée de cinq ou six marches, et le granit s’éleva pour former un simple siège noir au centre. Cela ressemblait presque à un trône, mais celui d’un monarque résolument modeste. Après un dernier regard vers Leon, l’oiseau battit des ailes une fois et disparut dans le lointain. Leon prit quelques instants pour se ressaisir avant de se relever péniblement. Il se traîna jusqu’à la plateforme, gravit les marches et se tint devant le trône. Il savait ce qu’il devait faire maintenant, mais il jeta un dernier coup d’œil autour de lui. Les alentours étaient redevenus aussi sereins qu’auparavant, comme si la tempête n’avait jamais existé, et l’oiseau avait disparu dans les brumes. Sur ce, Leon sourit, s’assit sur le siège et ferma les yeux. — Leon sentit qu’il était allongé sur de la pierre dure. L’air était frais, et la chaleur du soleil caressait sa peau. Son corps était vidé de son pouvoir magique, mais aussi empli d’une grande force. Ses yeux étaient fermés, et il ne trouvait pas la volonté de les ouvrir. Il resta ainsi longtemps, une heure ou deux, estima-t-il. Tout ce qu’il fit fut de savourer la chaleur du soleil et respirer calmement. Quand il ouvrit enfin les yeux, il se retrouva au sommet de la Montagne du Titan de l’Orage. Le pic adjacent à la plateforme avait été brisé, réduit de moitié, et de nombreuses traces de brûlures l’entouraient. Toute trace du cercle magique avait disparu, à l’exception de quelques lignes noircies, et des flaques d’eau s’étaient formées dans les creux de la pierre. Artorias était assis au bord de la plateforme, contemplant la forêt, lorsqu’il remarqua que Leon s’était enfin réveillé. Il poussa un soupir de soulagement, la tension de la nuit passée s’évaporant enfin. Il se leva aussi calmement que possible et s’approcha de son fils. « Comment te sens-tu, petit lion ? » Leon mit quelques instants à comprendre la question avant de répondre, hésitant. « Bien, je suppose. Très fatigué. » « C’est compréhensible. Ton corps a été inondé de magie étrangère, presque déchiré de l’intérieur comme de l’extérieur, et a dû réveiller son propre pouvoir dormant pour ne pas se briser complètement. » « Alors, je me suis éveillé ? Le rituel a fonctionné ? » Artorias sourit, fier. « Bien sûr que oui. Tu n’as qu’à examiner ton état physique pour t’en rendre compte. » Leon s’exécuta, laissant le peu de mana qu’il avait accumulé circuler dans son corps. Il sentit une faible énergie revenir dans ses muscles, l’absence de ses anciennes blessures, mais surtout, il remarqua qu’à chaque fois que la magie atteignait son cœur, seule une infime partie se transformait en mana. Le reste semblait simplement disparaître. « Je sens la magie disparaître dans mon cœur. Cela veut dire qu’elle est stockée ? Ai-je atteint le deuxième niveau de magie ? » demanda-t-il, enthousiaste. « Oui, c’est le cas. C’est facile à sentir quand on devient plus fort, mais crois-moi, tu fais désormais partie des mages de deuxième niveau. » Artorias rayonnait de fierté en regardant son fils. Leon réprima l’envie d’éclater de rire, mais un immense sourire illumina son visage. Il s’apprêtait à poursuivre ses questions excit
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